:GA: Cap'n Evangelina

Yayyyy!~ another critique!

Alright. Im going to start off with imrpovements

1.the cheeks are a little to chubby.

2. Usually when drawing humans, the outline of the nose seems to connect with the cornea's (AKA the pink part of your eyes)

3.The ears seem a little different, but its okay, EVERYONE messes up with ears, like me <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>

4. If you wanted to shade the hair, put lighter hair strings because it kinnda looks like you were shading out the lines of the hair.

and um... Ya :'D


So......................... er hi <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/> I like everything else tho <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/> Hope this helped!~